"Miguel!" Laarni screamed from behind him. He turned around to see her running towards him. They embraced.
"Salamat." He said. "For listening to me." she just smiled.
"It was the song." she replied. "May kakaibang pakiramdam na dulot yung kanta."
"Sabi ko na eh." Miguel joked. "May lihim kang pagtingin sa akin."
"Che. Ikaw kaya nauna." Laarni replied, pinching his nose. "Pero yung kanta talaga. Second na lang yung good looks mo." The two laughed, as the sun continued its path and the night sky was creeping in.
FIN
11 comments:
Yay! Hehe...
Galing mo talaga! Another great story.
Hay kakalungkot tapos na. Sana pinaabot mo man lang ng Grand Dream Night hehe. Great story no more no less. *thumbs up*
nyaaaah, tapos na...wala n akong aabangan...
Great work!
hay, kakilig tlga...sna mangyari 'to sa totoo...
haha :))
waaahhhh...tpos na wla po b 'tong sequel? haha :))
ang galing nio po tlga!!!
salamt po s inyong mgandang storya!!!
god bless po...:) :) :)
Congratulations for a job well done! Ano kaya reaction nina Laarni, Miguel, at ni Bea kapag nabasa nila 'to? Hehehehe :)
TAPOS NA?!?! :(:(:(
Sayang naman. Sobrang sinubaybayan ko pa naman toh :) hehe.
Sana they could make a teleserye about this, or kahit your song man lang.
Good job :)
guys,
maraming maraming salamat sa mga comments niyo. nakakataba ng puso dahil for a while i really lost my passion in writing.
words like these really encourage me to write some more.
Again, salamat!
Aww, sad that it's over, but it was so much fun to read.
Great job!! Congrats!
wala bang sequel nitong story? para masaya, hahaha! :D
as for the sequel, i'm still thinking about it. i'll let you guys know soon enough.
I amafanoflaargueland i really enjoyed what you have written.Tama sila gawan mo nang sequel.
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